Thursday, July 2, 2009

My one and only contribution to our blog...thus far.

Since this is my first time posting, I guess I'd better introduce myself. I'm Tyler - the lesser half of the Tyler and Nicole blog. Anyway, I've received a few requests for a poem I wrote a few years back, and thought this would be the easiest and most accessible way to share it. Feel free to use/share/take credit for as much as you like:

Precious Above All

By Tyler Lloyd


From far away I saw the tree,

And grasped the iron rod,

And pressing forward through the mist,

The narrow path I trod.


But faltering along the path,

I must have dropped my gaze.

From shining light I turned and saw

A building through the haze.


It towered high above the ground,

And people fine and proud,

From ev’ry doorway beckoned me

To come and join the crowd.


It seemed both great and wonderful,

Yet filled my heart with dread.

I turned away and fixed my view

On path and tree ahead.


But ever as my feet moved on,

My thoughts dwelt on the crowd,

Which mocked my struggle down below,

In voices harsh and loud.


The mist pressed close around me now,

I felt its tender strands,

That pulled so softly at my feet,

So gently at my hands.


One strand sang sweetly in my ear,

A soothing melody:

“Why walk this path so long and hard?

Come with us and be free!”


Relaxing grip upon the rod,

And view upon the tree,

I slowed my pace and looked around,

Intrigued by what I’d see.


The fog obscured the distant scene

That I could not resist.

I soon had left the pathway and

Was walking in the mist.


The threads of shadow pulled me on,

My face and skin felt cold.

Yet warmed I was by thick’ning cords

That now took greater hold.


And now and then from distant tree,

A beam of light would shine,

And I perceived these gentle cords

Were chains of dark design.


Before the beams the chains gave way,

Defeated by the light.

But fearing now to lose their touch,

I turned into the night.


I stumbled down my unseen path,

Uncertain and confused.

O’er rocks and pits I fell until

My hands and knees were bruised.


The cords that led so gently once,

Now pulled me to a race,

And tripping down one final slope,

I fell upon my face.


Then glancing up my eyes beheld

A river dark and deep,

And kneeling on that sandy shore,

I soon began to weep.


I shuddered at my bitter fate,

Afraid and lost, alone.

Why had I wandered from the path,

And left the truth I’d known?


I stood once more on weary feet,

And summoned all my will,

Determined to retrace my steps

Back up the treach’rous hill.


But though I tried to climb the bank,

The cords would give no slack,

And whipping at my arms and legs,

They roughly pulled me back.


Then wrapping ‘round my chest and waist,

And strengthening their hold,

They dragged me down the sandy bank,

Into the water cold.


These chains, not soft but sharp and hard,

Now muffled out my scream,

And laughing in my ears they pulled

Me ‘neath the murky stream.


Then sinking down into the depths,

My mind caught on the tree,

And straightway from my heart I cried,

“Dear Savior, rescue me!”


Then suddenly a light appeared

Above me on the sand,

And Jesus, kneeling on the shore,

Reached down and took my hand.


And as he made to raise me up,

My heart was filled with peace,

But still the heavy chains would not

Their rightful prize release.


I wondered then “what could He do?”

I knew the law’s demand.

But reaching down he grabbed a chain

With his almighty hand.


The razor edges cut Him, but

The chain broke with a crack,

And lashing back in fury left

A gash upon His back.


He reached again and broke once more

A heavy chain of sin,

It too recoiled, biting deep

Into His precious skin.


And each strong cord that He undid

Sprang back with all its might,

And threw upon His arms and back

The fullness of its spite.


When I could bear no more I cried

“I don’t deserve such grace!

It is not fair that you should bleed

And suffer in my place.”


With no response, He carried on.

I heard one final crack.

He lifted me, from bonds set free,

And placed me on His back.


Then slowly climbed back to the path –

His blood mixed with my tears.

Somehow His love had conquered sin,

And banished all my fears.


I hoped that He would take me to

The tree with no delay.

Instead He put me on the path

Where first my feet did stray.


Then very gently placed my hand

Back on the iron rod,

And for a while walked with me

The pathway home to God.


And someday when I’ve reached the tree,

I’ll fall down at the feet

Of Him who drank the bitter cup,

And made this fruit so sweet.

7 comments:

Lisa Marie said...

Wow, Tyler! That's really good! You even made me cry a little.

Krista said...

Wow! You have quite a talent Tyler.

Tyler Lloyd said...

Thanks. Sorry for the tears Lisa. (:

Lindsay Skinner said...

Take credit for??? I'm all over that! Seriously though, I have loved that poem. I have a copy with my scriptures & read it every so often. It's so great - thanks!

Unknown said...

I know this is an older post. I just read your poem today. It's so beautiful! Thank you!

tinu said...

Thank you for this beautiful poem! I will be using it and giving you all the credit! Such incredible work deserves to be credited to the artist. And I would never set the bar so high for my own work. I could never match it! LoL

tinu said...

Thank you for this beautiful poem! I will be using it and giving you all the credit! Such incredible work deserves to be credited to the artist. And I would never set the bar so high for my own work. I could never match it! LoL